Monday, October 17, 2011

Gettin Over You

Okay guys, I wrote a song, and I want you to be honest: is it good or not? Here it is:

You swore you'd never leave me,
And I believed you at the time
But as I'm standing here, I realize
Those words weren't worth the climb

Now baby, you said you loved me
But now that love is gone
You picked me up and then threw me down
and then I just hung on

You left me here in your dust,
Holding on to what you left behind
I believed in you, and you broke my trust.

(Chorus)How could you do this to me?
How can you walk away
Like it's easy?

I gave my heart to you
But you don't care
You thought I could live without,
Like you

I said I would get over you
So why do I feel this way?
Let's just be friends, that's what I need
So baby please just say okay

I know, I'm happy for her
But for me it's another say
I'm all mixed up, how should I act?
There's got to be some way

Chorus

Why do I feel so broken up?
Why can't I let you go?
After I told myself, we'll just be friends
Why do I get affected so?

Why do I let myself
Still feel hurt, betrayed and angry?
It's my own fault that I feel this way
I need to set you free

How did you do this to me?
Why did you walk away
So easily?

I put my trust in you
But you didn't realize,
You thought I would do just fine
Like you

Chorus, really loud.

So what do you think? It's my first, song, not my best. But what do you think?

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